Thursday, March 26, 2009
My short story intruduction - The thing that changes
The thing that changes Trash, mice everywhere, its cold and dark . In the other hand jerks screaming firing everyone, cars complaining to go trough other cars, guns firing and red dragons in a sunny day. In that could chilly place live a beautiful woman called Diana with her sparkly eyes she will call her mom desperate. Her mom wouldn't come and she will live Diana in the streets alone and cold. While the biggest jerk in all of Hollywood will just think that he will never love someone as much as he loves himself, that jerk was Ryan.
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I think you should go over your intro. I love your use of description but it won't matter unless you know how to use it. It's o.k but o.k won't get you an A, GREAT will. Just g over it and revise.
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