Friday, October 31, 2008

Lived's Revenge

A jealousy night changed every thing! In Texas there was the nicest girl ever know.Her name was Lived. Her friends stared hating her because of that. So they become so jealousy they plan to make her life miserable. They took her trow the park all the way to a muddy water. She was not dumb but they told her a cat was bleeding and they needed her help to find the cat that run to the park.When she got there, her friends trow her to the water and they were waiting for her to come out and then take a picture for the year book. But she didn't came into midnight and she had no pulse. She was dead! Her friends buried her in the muddy water.But when it was 12 o'clock she came back and and scratch her friends door every night.Into her parents toad they were crazy and left from Texas forever. Some kids said her name backwards and she'll scratch there door rooms into they left Texas forever.

Friday, October 17, 2008

Readers Response#3

Ana Guerrero
802 Edgar Allan
10/17/08
1-26pg By: John Neufeld

The tittle amazingly fits the story because is mostly about the Ficketts adopting Edgar Allan. About 3% of the story talks about his new family before he came. Then every thing else is about him and what his new family thinks about him. I don't agree with Mary Nell because she thinks that her parents shouldn't have adopted a kid with that skin color.For example: her words were,"why you adopted him instead of adopting a Mexican or a Chinese". That is being racist even do she say is not,he's a little kid she shouldn't say that. If I was the little kid I'll feel so sad and I woulnd't want to stay in that house. I'll think all the family hates me for starting problems. I'll maybe even runaway.What would you do?

Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Readers Response: Quesioning

Skinny questions:
1. Where is Obama from?
2.How old is McCain?
3.Who has the most votes?
Fat questions:
1.Is Obama the best candidate running for president?
2.When they become presidents are they going to do what they say or they are just lying?
3.Is McCain a peaceful men?

'Raft: This Land Is Your Land'

How does the information in the box "A Day in the Life (of me!)" helps the reader understand the article?

The information in the box of A Day in the Life (of me!) helps me predict that the story would be about a day. For example,in the box they say A day meaning that she would write about one day in her life. She could write about what she does in one day. Obviously she's going to write about herself.

Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Readers Response#1

Ana Guerrero
10/7/08
802
Tiger,Tiger
By:Lynne Reid Banks

This book amazed me. It teaches me a lot more about cultures that I already knew.I couldn't believe in some cultures, the parents of someone that is thirteen would accept marriage. Aurelia was one of those girls that didn't want to marry at a young age. She believed in freedom and she wanted to keep her innocence.

She wouldn't follow her mother steps. Marry at the age of thirteen and then have a baby at the age of fourteen. For her it was like this: live her life and don't marry when she gets older. A man was saying that it could be time for her to lose hr innocence . She didn't mind what that man said because dad wouldn't happen to her. Julius a close friend of hers lost his tiger.So Cesar take him to jail in chains.What you think could happen if there is another sequence of this book?